Half Sepa-ration | in progress
poesia tradotta:
W pół do rozstania (mistral)
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Moderator: Michał Zabłocki
Do we separate - or not?
Troubles with you I get lot
Seems to me you're too rich
Too cosy is your room each
I can only wave my hand
And look- by me here you stand
Dinner you serve me on time
My feelings do not sublime
If I don't come back on time
You do not commit a crime
When you are by me betrayed
You serve beer as an aid
And when I prefer some booze
You choose help me with no ruse
You come with your compresses
Thus your good will expresses
I wish you could loose your class
When I spend your dough - alas!
It's not manager I seek
Faithful, wise and also meek
I seek mad and some scurvy
Treating me topsy-turvy
I will treat her with ill will
Coz I'm a boor,lout and churl.
Troubles with you I get lot
Seems to me you're too rich
Too cosy is your room each
I can only wave my hand
And look- by me here you stand
Dinner you serve me on time
My feelings do not sublime
If I don't come back on time
You do not commit a crime
When you are by me betrayed
You serve beer as an aid
And when I prefer some booze
You choose help me with no ruse
You come with your compresses
Thus your good will expresses
I wish you could loose your class
When I spend your dough - alas!
It's not manager I seek
Faithful, wise and also meek
I seek mad and some scurvy
Treating me topsy-turvy
I will treat her with ill will
Coz I'm a boor,lout and churl.
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