Once upon a time

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Once upon a time
we would sigh
at the sight of the sky
It seemed to be so low
Just above our heads
It was enough to stretch our hands
and grab it

Once upon a time
I could die for you
without hesitation
In the wink of an eye
once
once

Once upon a time
You and I
We were free
We would run through the fields
And the sun would shine so brightly
once
once

Once upon a time
You and I
We were free
We could fly
even though we had no wings

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@ MagdalenaP

Even better! A song is in the offing me thinks!
26.11.2016,  mahengonsal

@ mahengonsal

thankU
actually it's a bit longer:
Once upon a time we would sigh
at the sight of the sky
It seemed to be so low
Just above our heads
It was enough to stretch our hands
Once upon a time
I could die for you
Without the wink of eye
Once upon a time
You and I
We were free
We would run through the fields
And the sun would shine so brightly
Once upon a time
You and I we could fly
Even though we had no wings

very visual

Very visual.Love it!
26.11.2016,  mahengonsal

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25.11.2016,  mahengonsal

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