Once upon a time | version: 24.11.2016 22:42

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Once upon the time
You and I
We were free
We would run through the fields
And the sun would shine so brightly
Once upon the time
You and I we could fly
Even though we had no wings

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@ MagdalenaP

Even better! A song is in the offing me thinks!
26.11.2016,  mahengonsal

@ mahengonsal

thankU
actually it's a bit longer:
Once upon a time we would sigh
at the sight of the sky
It seemed to be so low
Just above our heads
It was enough to stretch our hands
Once upon a time
I could die for you
Without the wink of eye
Once upon a time
You and I
We were free
We would run through the fields
And the sun would shine so brightly
Once upon a time
You and I we could fly
Even though we had no wings

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Very visual.Love it!
26.11.2016,  mahengonsal

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25.11.2016,  mahengonsal

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