by your side

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I’ll lie by your side
On the ground
Holding your hand
Left hand
As long as it takes
We’ll pray
In the dark

Until the electrician comes



 
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@ mahengonsal

you don't have to be sorry!!!!
it isn't clear from the poem that it's a sad one unless one knows what it is about!

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Sorry Magda! It is just the last line made it sound funny to me. Sometimes we are amused by sad things depending on the context (such as laughing at a fat person with a red face when he slips and falls and looks angry). This is what is called incongruous humour. I suppose your last line was what made me smile!
16.03.2016,  mahengonsal

@ mahengonsal

wow...I didn't mean that!
actually it is a very sad poem........!

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Lovely humour!
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15.03.2016,  mahengonsal

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01.03.2016,  MaryPe

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:)
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28.02.2016,  TiAmo

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