So there she is | version: 11.07.2015 00:50
So there she is
Standing in the rain
All wet
Seems like she doesn’t care any more
I open the door
And tap her back
Would you like to come?
Would you like some tea?
I see her tears
She slowly nods her head
She’s so sad
I’ve never seen anyone like that
Like the saddest clown
I don’t matter any more
She says
I don’t exit
I’m falling into pieces
And I lie on the floor and he walks over
With anger
And he walks away with indifference
I can’t breathe
It chokes me
The pain
The call wanting to come out of the chest
The nest is destroyed
The nest is destroyed
Standing in the rain
All wet
Seems like she doesn’t care any more
I open the door
And tap her back
Would you like to come?
Would you like some tea?
I see her tears
She slowly nods her head
She’s so sad
I’ve never seen anyone like that
Like the saddest clown
I don’t matter any more
She says
I don’t exit
I’m falling into pieces
And I lie on the floor and he walks over
With anger
And he walks away with indifference
I can’t breathe
It chokes me
The pain
The call wanting to come out of the chest
The nest is destroyed
The nest is destroyed
Poem versions
- 13.01.2018 11:36
- 13.07.2015 01:18
- 11.07.2015 00:50
@ mahengonsal
right! Thank U so much!! :) (correction done :) )Great poem!
Enjoyed it very much. Is there a typo on line 16 - should it be " I don't exist" and not I don't exit.My rating