Once he came,

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Once he came,
once he sat by her side
the magic was gone
He doesn’t use these words she thought
He doesn’t think like this
Doesn’t feel like this
There was something in his eyes,
yet it wasn’t enough
The magic was gone
She saw in his eyes she was beautiful
The kisses he kissed her were tender
But the magic was gone
Yet it’s ok
She’s kind of healed now
Kind of sad now
But ready to wave him goodbye



 
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@ mahengonsal

agony of feelings ;) ;) it's a very old story ;)

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Beautifully written. One can sense the agony in her.
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23.11.2015,  mahengonsal