(IPOGS, Walls) From the darkening tower,

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From the darkening tower,
my breath swirls in the air.
The moon has been kidnapped
by clouds
and glows like a pearl, dimly.

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This poem succeeds in creating a strong visual image in my mind when I read it. I applaud it!
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17.11.2015,  mahengonsal

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29.10.2015,  wolfsbeeren